Seeking a career position, where my work ethic, level of commitment to the team, excellent analytical, interpersonal, leadership, conflict-resolution, and technical skills that will be an asset to your company.
You need to tune it down a notch, something like:
Seeking a ______________(whatever the position is that you are applying for) that will challenge my technical, analytical…skills.
One other thing, fine tune your adjectives to reflect what the company is looking for – so if they focus on team play, state something like you are a solid team player.
Allll of that said, I really hate 'objective' statements…they seldom tell me something different from everyone else. I prefer to use (and coach other successfully to use) a summary wish would read something like:
____________(whatever the career is) professional with ________years experience successfully demonstrating strong analytical and technical skills.
Does that make sense? You have just introduced yourself with a two second snapshot of who you are and hopefully you have made me want to read more of your resume.
Good luck!
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Simplify your objective, right now it's an eyeful. Emphasize your 3 top characteristics. The rest can be included in your cover letter.
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You need to tune it down a notch, something like:
Seeking a ______________(whatever the position is that you are applying for) that will challenge my technical, analytical…skills.
One other thing, fine tune your adjectives to reflect what the company is looking for – so if they focus on team play, state something like you are a solid team player.
Allll of that said, I really hate 'objective' statements…they seldom tell me something different from everyone else. I prefer to use (and coach other successfully to use) a summary wish would read something like:
____________(whatever the career is) professional with ________years experience successfully demonstrating strong analytical and technical skills.
Does that make sense? You have just introduced yourself with a two second snapshot of who you are and hopefully you have made me want to read more of your resume.
Good luck!
References :